Wednesday, October 20, 2010
’The Interlopers’ Alternate Ending
Georg filled with fear said, “Ulrich, I’m sorry” Ulrich mixed wit fear and confusion asks, ‘What? Why are you saying all this.” Then with a gun shot and whine from one of the wolves, Ulrich and Georg are in shock. Ulrich then hears a familiar voice and so does Georg. Both of their men had come and one of Ulrich men saw the wolves and shot one of the wolves, the rest of Ulrich's men killed the rest of the wolf pack. Both Georg and Ulrich scream for their men not to shoot each other. The men are confused and Ulrich says with a voice full of kindness “We are friends now, the feud has ended.” The men just stared in wonder. "Well are you guys just going to stand there and keep my dear friend Ulrich under this tree?" the men just stared "Get Georg out from under this tree!"scream as loud as he could. He men then rushed to the tree on Georg's side and helped him from under and got out a cloth and started to try to wipe away the blood from around his eye. While Ulrich was still under the tree, Georg as best as he could stared at his men than at Ulrich, his men then walked over to lift that side of the tree. "Thank you, friend" "Same here, Friend" While Ulrich was helped by Georg's men and Georg was helped by Ulrich's men both were thankful that they survived and had made a good new friend.
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NICE STORY JENN
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ReplyDeleteJennifer, This is an exciting alternate ending. keep up the good work.
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