Monday, November 29, 2010

First Persuasive Paragraph

Students should/should not be given money to buy Christmas gifts for their friends

Student should be given money to buy thier friends gifts. It is the nice thing to do and a friend would greatly appreciate it. For things like Christmas or a birthday, having money to buy someone a gift is a huge help. The younger students who can't afford gift, or too young to have a job, where would they get the money? These reasons are really good and I think that if we really did get money to but gifts, it would be used good. It also should not be allowed to get money to buy someone a gift, it might be misused to buy something useless, or for themselves.

1 comment:

  1. Jen, I agree that some students may use the gift money to purchase items for themselves. It's sad, but I think it may happen. Would you be tempted to buy a gift for yourself?

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