(Metaphor) Life here is the same as watching a movie
There are actors
There are kids
What movie this is
A comedy so funny that its not
A horror so bad that I only laugh
A love story or just a lie
The people you see here
They go faster than the wind
How long will they stay
(Simile) And stay in a place like a tree’s roots
The teachers we see will soon go and we will flow
The memory of them will stay behind
(Personification) But soon this river of hope
Will turn to a river of hate
Forever
This place is in mind
The fights, the rumors, the life
You are a very good poetry writer! Keep it up. I think you deserve above grade level!
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Thats pretty good, I like how you labled simile, metaphor, and personification.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very insightful poem, Jennifer!
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